Outline
Workshop
Does all
communication serve a positive purpose?
Yes- prevents
isolation, encouraging
No- bullying/harassment,
discouraging
Argument:
No, not all communication serves a positive purpose.
I need
sufficient evidence (enough evidence—at least 3 main supports)
Main
supports: bullying/harassment, discouraging, digital communication has unique
challenges
1.
Introduction
a.
Get my
audience’s attention (Hook)
b.
Thesis statement: No, not all
communication serves a positive purpose because of things like bullying,
discouragement, and unique challenges that come with digital communication.
c. Some filler/fluff; AVOID: “In this essay, I am going
to tell you about…” “I am going to talk about…” “I am going to tell you why…”
2.
Bullying/Harassment
a.
Common problem
b.
Can lead to
depression and suicide
c. Especially affects
young people
d.
Defend against counter-arguments: Some may argue that modern verbal bullying is not “real”
bullying, but statistics about teen depression and suicide rates argue
otherwise.
3.
Discouraging
a.
Easy to do
with social media
b.
People may
not realize the impact they’re having with their words
c. Can have a negative impact on school and workplace
productivity
d.
Counter-argument
defense: While discouraging communication does not have a profound impact on
everyone, the hours of productivity lost in countless schools and workplaces do
impact everyone.
4.
Digital
Communication has unique challenges
a.
Social media
b.
Smart phones
c. Always being connected
d.
Counter-argument
defense: Some may argue that there are more benefits than downsides to digital
communication, but the harshness of our modern society proves otherwise.
5.
Conclusion
a.
Restate my
thesis
b.
Summarize my
main points
c. Summarize my counter-argument defenses
d.
Include a
call to action, if possible: Modern man, upon realizing the negative impact of
many forms of communication, should reject societal norms and adopt a code of
conduct that is more beneficial.
i.
NOT: Now
that you have read my essay, you should…
Cited
Textual Evidence: ICE
Introduce
the quotation (Why are
you including this quote?)
Cite (pg. #, ln. #) (“Fries are
the best” 90) (“Roses are red” ln. 80)
Explain the quotation (How does
this quote serve as evidence for your main point?)